thank you, i tried to improve on it as much as i could, i wanted to just replace the original one with this one, but after a certain amount of listens or something it locks it from editing.

that's what i've been saying all along. lolz but i guess if you just listen to it once, it drags on a bit.

lol i guess i'm talking to myself right now as someone might think. pretty funni tho lol.

Do you even know music? Putting random sharps, naturals, and flats together is how music is made and they are arpeggios my good sir, and it's more than you have done in your music so suck a fat one.

You make yourself look like a dumb ass in these "reviews" you're leaving.

Well everyone else seems to understand the point of uploading an idea but you, and you, being the best musician in the world, would know that it would be unacceptable to hear the fingers sliding when someone uploads a random tune on to the internet.

I feel that lyrics can actually take away from the freedom of thought in a song.

O and by the way, I'm not mad. It's actually pretty funny that you would go to these lengths to get "revenge."

You can zero bomb this stuff all you like but I still wont care because in the end I know I wont flip shit if I get criticized, and it's just Newgrounds dude, not the end of the world.

Um...You listen to music much? I'm guessing not because to me lyrics just constrict the listeners thoughts, while no lyrics allow people to think of anything. Words tend to guide peoples thought process and make you think down a narrow road while instrumentals are...well just better in my opinion. A wider range of emotions can be felt, I guess is what I'm trying to get at.

Why put words to this when everything hasn't been written anyways? You of all people should know.